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  1. 07-09-2008, 20:39 #1
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    Default Game Desc on login page.

    The one we have is kinda boring.

    "Nation-Wars is a free multiplayer game ect ect ect"

    I just made a quick and simple one but i would like to change it.

    I would like ideas from all of you. If you are interested, please post what you would like it to say.

    Guidelines:

    -Can't be much longer then what is up now.
    -needs to be exciting and makes someone curious about the game.

    I'll keep this open for a few days and then pick the winning one.

    thanks

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    You're right, it isn't very good. Here is my attempt:

    Nation Wars is a free, multiplayer, turn base strategy game where you will complete with hundreds of other players to achieve world dominance. Team up with other players to form nations and become an unstoppable force. Whether you become a peaceful farming community or an industrial war machine is your choice, but always remember that dominance always comes for a price... Are you ready to start your journey?
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    maybe also add something along the lines of "fast paced, addictive game with constant changes in fortunes etc etc and a thriving community numbering hundreds of members"

    ?

    Quote Originally Posted by Cemetary View Post
    Pretty sure if Anton wanted to he could have a 15+ person nation every set of decently experienced players.. hell id probably join him every set if he asked jsut because i know that their wont be a bunch of tards in the nation with me
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    I'm not convienced that 10 minute turns is "fast paced" )
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    Do you think you have what it takes to outsmart the enemy and become the leading power, feared by those who are forced to lay in the remnants of the states turned to dust in your wake? Whether you choose to become a peaceful farming community or an industrial war machine, fight alone or in a nation with members from a thriving community... it is time to prepare for WAR!

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    it is to someone who is very busy
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    Quote Originally Posted by p-kitty View Post
    ((sorry, I'm not stealing... it just fits well... I liked the way it sounded and thought that such a brilliant line shouldn't go to waste =p))
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    nice suggestions.. Look good so far.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jasonlfunk View Post
    no worries man
    p-kitty is female hehe.
    btw...any mention of perhaps: "commercial super power" in addition to the industrial + farming suggestions?

    Quote Originally Posted by Cemetary View Post
    Pretty sure if Anton wanted to he could have a 15+ person nation every set of decently experienced players.. hell id probably join him every set if he asked jsut because i know that their wont be a bunch of tards in the nation with me
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    Nut uh... everyone knows that the only girl to every play this game was Stoness.
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